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Post by Edward Elric on Nov 24, 2007 18:42:06 GMT 5
Mua apllication is for Rae... But the RP sample is for Ed. Here's the Rp sample for Rae:
Rae's username: chochang (i know its a girl, but the girl i knew gave me the account ahaha ok?)
Rae Fuery looked around the room and sighed. It seemed that no one wants to give a crucial suggestion, or even drink their tea or something. They looked stiff. "Look, you can all calm down because I am TOTALLY, not going to eat you up." Rae said, laughing light heartedly. The people in the room seemed to relax. There were a few smiles here and there. "Good, good. We need to be all friendly, happy and relaxed in order to carry on with the discussing. As I was asking, is there anyone who heard anything new about the Death Eaters?"
No answer.
"I repeat-"
"Yes, sir." A 4th year boy said at the corner of the room. Rae turned towards Edward Elric. And blinked. "Yes, err, Shorty?" Rae asked, giggling to himself. The room also giggled with him. Well, maybe except Edward. "Yeah... yeah... you can't see me since I'm so small, you can't differenciate me from all the grains of sand." Edward said in a matter of fact voice, arms crossed. The room stared. Including Rae.
"VERY FUNNY!"
Edward yelled, slamming the table and looking real pissed. Rae and the whole room jumped. "Uh, ahem, sorry, Mr Elric. I didn't mean it that way... heh. So just share with us, now?" Rae asked as Edward glared at everyoen who laughed. They looked afraid. Edward coughed. Rae smiled.
"I said... GO ON. So we can all get outta here for supper."
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Post by Holden Caulfield on Nov 25, 2007 10:36:51 GMT 5
Out of due respect, I think the Head of the Order should be an adult. It's just stupid for a kid to lead a bunch of adults.
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Christian Niwa
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Post by Christian Niwa on Nov 26, 2007 0:01:28 GMT 5
Well the Head of the Order is an adult, I have just been informed that I am the head, and now I must pick my first and second commands. If the admins do not mind my doing this I want anyone who has turned if an application to be in the Order and wants to be second or third in command, please fill this will form out and pm it to me, I may ask a few extra questions. I will wait four days(11/29/07) for them to be turned in, so there's no need to rush and be the first one, I will look over them carefully and decide fairly. And after you have sent it in I will explain thoroughly why I have asked you to answer each of these.
(Lol. I’m not like others, I want to pick loyal and active people to be apart of this, I hope it’ll help with the Death Eater’s activity as well, and maybe even the site’s… This lack of plot is doing us no good)
How active are you usually?:
Would you become more active if there was more for you to do?:
Have you read my post to be Head? If yes, what do you think of it?:
List all of the dueling spells you know off hand. ( No search engines):
How long have you been rping on HP sites?:
Give me a sample rp: (This can be one that you make up randomly right now, or one of your best from another site, this won’t count for to much, and I’d want more of a normal rp than one to do with being part of the Order.)
Explain your character’s personality:
Why would your character want to be part of the Order?:
Why are you applying for this OC wise? The just to be apart of it? Or actually be apart of the plot?:
[b]How active are you usually?[/b]:
[b]Would you become more active if there was more for you to do?[/b]:
[b]Have you read my post to be Head? If yes, what do you think of it?[/b]:
[b]List all of the dueling spells you know off hand.[/b] [i]( No search engines)[/i]:
[b]How long have you been rping on HP sites?[/b]:
[b]Give me a sample rp:[/b] [i](This can be one that you make up randomly right now, or one of your best from another site, this won’t count for to much, and I’d want more of a normal rp than one to do with being part of the Order.)[/i]
[b]Explain your character’s personality:[/b]
[b]Why would your character want to be part of the Order?:[/b]
[b]Why are you applying for this OC wise? The just to be apart of it? Or actually be apart of the plot?:[/b]
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Post by Edward Elric on Nov 26, 2007 4:29:04 GMT 5
[ Wow, what that Prof said was harsh. ]
How active are you usually?: Very!
Would you become more active if there was more for you to do?: Err... I still need my sleep, I suppose, but for 80% of my time online, I've got nothing to do, so perhaps, I will have more stuff to do then! =P
Have you read my post to be Head? If yes, what do you think of it?: As a Rp Patrol, I read everybody's post, I suppose (application, not RP! I will die!!). It was good, but I suppose you copied the whole thing from somewhere else to here? Like maybe Microsoft word? You also copied this form as well? But the RP was good. It was well done. And pretty... interesting. Weee. xD Ok, if ot you won't be chosen as the Head of the Order.
List all of the dueling spells you know off hand. ( No search engines): Expalliarmus Stupefy Bombarda Maxima Pertificus Totalus Sectumsempra Reducto (errr...?) Arguamenti Immobulus Protego Levicorpus
How long have you been rping on HP sites?: 2 years
Give me a sample rp: (This can be one that you make up randomly right now, or one of your best from another site, this won't count for to much, and I'll want more of a normal rp than one to do with being part of the Order.)
There was rain in Amestris. The thick fog blanketed central, and Edward Elric was afraid. The rain dripped down his hair, long and golden, his eyes shimmering. The colonel and Alphonse Elric was standing beside him, watching the silent Central City of Amestris.
"The sickness... I heard it had been going around..." Edward said quietly, looking up at the colonel. Roy Mustang simply nodded slightly and added in an indifferent tone, "Yes. We should stay inside, actually. All the dogs are to be captured here. I heard that the plaque started from them..." Roy checked his watch. "Your train's due in an hour Fullmetal. I'll send you to the station with Miss Winry Rockbell."
"No, its okay. Me and Alphonse can get there safely... with Winry." Edward said, smiling and shaking his head. "Come on, Al." He knocked lightly on Al¡¯s armor, making a gonging sound. Alphonse raised a hand in farewell to the colonel and followed his brother back to the inn. Roy narrowed his eyes and a small smile came to his lips before he got into his car.
"What is it, Sir?" Hawkeye said, looking back at Roy, her face indifferent as Roy's face. Roy looked at her for a moment, then he sighed. "Nothing." Hawkeye turned back and her eyebrows creased a little, then she drove off.
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"Winry, we're back." Alphonse cleaned his armor dry, and Ed squashed the water out of his red coat. Winry smiled and popped her head out of the blankets. "Back so fast from your meeting?" She asked, her bright blue eyes gleaming as she stared at Ed.
Edward went slightly pink in his cheeks, but he still answered her question. ¡°Yeah. We¡¯re finally going back to Resembool. Pack up your stuff¡¡± Edward stared at the suitcases that are already nicely packed. ¡°Hey¡¡± Edward narrowed his golden eyes. Winry pouted at Edward, looking a little angry. ¡°What do you mean by ¡®Hey¡¡¯? I helped you packed it. I knew we¡¯d be walking, so I threw away some of those sweet wrappers and tins that you crushed and threw inside. Now it¡¯s A LOT lighter already.¡±
Edward laughed. ¡°Right¡ thanks!¡± He said, carrying it. ¡°Whoa¡ it is sure light!¡± Edward said thoughtfully. Winry smiled slyly. ¡°Seeing you so small, I don¡¯t think you¡¯d be able to carry something that heavy.¡± Edward snapped. Instantly.
¡°WHO ARE YOU CALLING SOMEONE THAT CAN BE USED AS A SCREW IN A WATCH?!¡±
¡°Calm down¡¡± Winry yelled, covering her ears. ¡°I AM SORRY, OKAY?! Let¡¯s go, or we¡¯ll miss the train! And if you defect my ears, Granny¡¯s gonna kill you, because she told you to keep my wellbeing!¡±
¡°RIGHT¡¡± Edward said, walking out of the door.
Alphonse sighed and said nothing. He wanted to stay out of their¡ after-marriage quarrels ¨C
CLANG.
¡°I know what you¡¯re thinking about Al¡¡± Edward growled.
Alphonse stared at Winry. ¡°HE¡¯S PSYCHIC!¡±
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Stepping down onto the street, Edward sighed, looking around for any signs of the sickness. He knew getting the antidote is a real pain¡ in fact, no antidote was found for this sickness yet, and he was getting some kind of fear in his heart already. Walking along the pavement, Edward growled at a shaggy looking guy coughing by the street. ¡°HEY YOU! What are you doing out here? Do you have the sickness?¡± Edward asked, stopping in front of Alphonse and Winry. Alphonse grasped his brother. ¡°Brother¡ you think so?¡±
¡°Yeah. If he has it¡ he should stay indoors.¡± Edward pointed out. The man stared at them with wide eyes and backed away. ¡°I¡ don¡¯t have it. Cough¡ Go away!¡± The man fell on the ground. ¡°He has it.¡± Edward told Alphonse.
¡°Brother! Let¡¯s get out of here, you might get the sickness.¡± Alphonse grabbed his brother. Edward glared at the man. ¡°But if I don¡¯t report him and send him medical attention soon, it¡¯ll affect even more people, Al! Don¡¯t be selfish!¡± Edward pushed Al back by accident. Alphonse stepped back, shocked. ¡°Ed!¡±
¡°Go away¡¡± The man said, then he grabbed Winry, whipping out a knife. ¡°GET AWAY!¡±
Edward tensed. ¡°WHAT THE¡ Winry, you¡ you can get grabbed like this?¡±
Alphonse gasped. ¡°Edward! That guy has it, if he grabs onto Winry like this¡ Although his is in the first stage, its still dangerous¡ he has¡ the Canidae Plague¡ He might¡¡± Al said. Winry was crying.
Ed refused to get any closer. ¡°But¡¡± He growled. And kicked out. The man let go of Winry and ran away, howling. He dissapeared, screaming something like, ¡°You¡¯ll pay for this¡ I will seek revenge¡¡±
Edward spat on the ground. Winry was shivering and crying. ¡°Why were you hesitating?¡± She said. ¡°That guy¡¯s got a knife¡ and what plague are you talking about? What do you mean? Why won¡¯t both of you tell me anything?¡±
¡°I¡¡± Edward said, looking down.
Alphonse looked away. ¡°Because you¡¯re scared of the plague too, aren¡¯t you, Big Brother?¡± Al sounds disappointed. And he was whispering.
¡°Let¡¯s go.¡± Alphonse said, ignoring Ed and leading Winry out. ¡°Nothing, there is no plague or sorts.¡±
Edward followed them a few paces behind, wondering if Winry was okay. It was his fault. And now Al hates him too. He could hear it.
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¡°Granny¡ I am home. Cough¡cough.¡±
Edward stayed outside. Alphonse looked at him. ¡°I suppose you still want to think over your actions, Brother. I need to check on Winry.¡± Alphonse closed the door behind him.
Edward sat down on the steps, feeling nowhere near home. He had been trusted to take good care of Winry on this mission¡ and yet¡ She might have gotten the plague. She will die, if it goes past the second stage. Looking up at the skies, he thought about what the colonel had said about the Canidae Plague. ¡°The first stage isn¡¯t so bad¡ just coughing and fever¡ but it¡¯ll worsen. Stage two is very bad. The victims start to have hallucunations. The terminal stage¡ anyone who reaches this have very little chance of living, Fullmetal. I think they have come up with an antidote already. But I don¡¯t really know where to get it. The military is trying all means to get our hands on the antidote¡It is said to be in Central¡¡±
Edward heard the coughing of Winry. He stepped up and opened the door. The coughing faded away. He looked into the house and Granny Pinako looked at him grimly. ¡°Hmph.¡± She turned back and dialed a number on the phonse quickly. Edward frowned, feeling worry turning his mind into a great big mess of thoughts. ¡°Alphonse¡¡± he started, but Al wouldn¡¯t look at him. Alphonse just walked up the stairs, and Edward heard a door close. The phone got through to whoever Pinako was calling.
¡°Hello¡ Dr. Benito? It¡¯s Winry. Hurry, come down here. I think she¡¯s got the plague.¡± Pinako said, holding tightly onto the telephone line. ¡°¡ what?! What do you mean there¡¯s no use? Antidote?! Not found yet? WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO? I know. I understand. Yes. Alright. Thank you!¡± Pinako slammed down the phone and ran up the stairs. Alphonse came down. ¡°I am going.¡±
Alphonse brushed past Edward. Edward tensed. I will find it for you Winry. It¡¯s my fault¡ It was my fault that I landed you in this. You will¡ you must wait. Pinako was standing in front of Ed.
¡°What are you doing here? I told you to take care of my grandaughter. Look at what state she¡¯s in now?¡± Pinako said, unhappy. ¡°She¡¯s the only one in the Rockbell family line with me now. And the way you treated Al. You¡¯re very selfish, Edward Elric. Go find somewhere else to stay. Maybe this will help you.¡±
¡°Granny. I am sorry.¡± Edward said, lowering his head. ¡°Please¡ tell Winry to wait.¡±
Pinako shook her head. ¡°She is waiting, but the person is not you.¡±
Edward stepped out into the rain and the door closed. He put his hand to his forehead, messing his hair abit. And he turned around and begin to run towards the train station. The bells rang as the train left the station, and Edward bought the tickets for the next train to Central and sat down the the bench. He had forgotten all about Al¡
And nearby, a pair of purple eyes watched him gently, a small smile curling around her lips. ¡°Time to give him trouble.¡± A seductive voice said, and the person walked away.
Explain your character³Õ personality: Rash, sometimes stubborn and selfish. But he has a kind heart under a steel face, and he will not allow evil to stand in his way. He cares more for people around him then himself.
Why would your character want to be part of the Order?: He doesn't want evil to stand in the way. For him, the DEs are like the Homunculi (Humans made with the Philosopher's Stone in his country.). And he'd want to eradicate them.
Why are you applying for this OC wise? The just to be apart of it? Or actually be apart of the plot?: A plot, of course! I can teach Alchemy! *claps* BASHOOM! "See?! A wand!! But it doesn't work."
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Post by Christian Niwa on Dec 1, 2007 11:01:48 GMT 5
Sorry for any subspense, but now I announce that Edward Elric is second in command and Wyatt Ofalia-Lycan is third seeing as they're the only ones who applied. Now if anyone still wants the chance just try to out do one of these two's appilcations and add a battle rp with it as well.
I'll explain why I asked each question at a later time.
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Post by Edward Elric on Dec 12, 2007 9:15:07 GMT 5
^^ and now what? Its a little inactive around here...
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Prof Napoleon (Poltergeist)
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I am Napoleon Noir, king of chaos, and master of recking things (i also teach ancient ruins!!)
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Post by Prof Napoleon (Poltergeist) on Apr 3, 2008 16:47:49 GMT 5
Submission for 2nd or 3rd in Command
How active are you usually?: Good Times (Not Busy, ect.): Pop in several times a day Bad Times (am Busy, can't find time, ect.): one every two days
Would you become more active if there was more for you to do?: Yes
Have you read my post to be Head? If yes, what do you think of it?: No, i haven't
List all of the dueling spells you know off hand. ( No search engines): Why this would matter to a poltergiest, i do not know, but here you go: Unforgivables: Killing Curse - Avada Kedavra Cruciatus Curse - Crucio Imperius Curse - Imperio
Defensive Spells: Protego
Offensive Spells: Pertificus Totalus Stupefy Sectumsempra
Both (can be Offensive, and Defensive): Expelliarmus Levicorpus
How long have you been rping on HP sites?: three years
Give me a sample rp: I'm too tired to write a new one, or find a good one, so heres the one from my order application:
Napoleon flew around the school at night, invisible, looking for anyone that shouldn't be there. But this wasn't a wandering to find out-of-bed students, this was real, this was an Order Assignment. He turned left and saw two students at the other end of the corridor. Swooping down upon them he cried, voice booming; ‘Why are you out of bed at this time??’ It happened instantly. They pulled wands out from what seemed like nowhere and turned around looking for the source of the voice. Napoleon saw the face of one of them and recognised him as a Slytherin who had left 20 years ago, a Death Eater. Napoleon flew around them, still invisible, and, making no noise, pulled the rug from under their feet. They fell back and their wands flew from out of their hands. Napoleon caught them and started screaming; ‘DEATH EATERS, DEATH EATERS IN THE CASTLE, DEATH EATERS’. No-one came. He tried again, but still, no-one came. Deciding that the other Order members must be Dueling more Death Eaters, Napoleon developed a plan. He made the rug fly up around the now unconscious Death Eaters and made a knot at the top. He then went off to help the effort, with the bag of Death Eaters bobbing up and down in front of him.
Explain your character’s personality: Mischievous, but full hearted. Annoys people as a primal instinct, his natural way of dealing with loneliness.
Why would your character want to be part of the Order?: He is willing to do anything to defeat the Death Eaters, so that students will be afraid of him again.
Why are you applying for this OC wise? The just to be apart of it? Or actually be apart of the plot?: I guess, that it is to make sure that people joining aren't going to desert us after a few days. Also, i want more to do, so being 2nd or 3rd in command will acheive that.
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